So today we are reading a non-fiction, text about a penguin hospital which mostly penguins go there and birds and dogs as well, so we are still doing the synthesis question instead of making a information web. So for today I have to desgin or make something to protect penguins from dogs so this is what I have made!
Hey Fria,
ReplyDeleteI like your 'Poster' you made it's amazing, I never thought it better than mine!
Next time you could work on is adding more information about the young penguin poster thing!
Good work,
- Jorja :)
Hi Jorja, thanks for commenting and i'll work on adding more information next time!
DeleteHey Fria.
ReplyDeleteYour poster is great.
Why are you reading the Penguin Hospital?
Is the Book Interesting?
I am reading The Butterfly lion.
Anyway great post!
BYe
Hi Renae! Thanks for commenting, I don't actually know why i'm reading the penguin hospital because our teacher chooses books for us, and yes the book is intersting!
DeleteWow what a creative way to show that we should make places for just pengians oh hi my name is Ashlee and I am a year six at rimu in Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you added a sign.
do you like penguins?
bye for now.
sincerely Ashlee
Hello Fria! Im Eamon from YMS.
ReplyDeleteThis Penguin hospital you have made looks amazing, I really like you have added the sign, so that owners know not to bring dogs in! that could be really helpful to some people, and If you added a braille sign, blond people would know to.
This Brought me back to when in Kindergarten, I drew a picture a dish hospital, because really fish don't get the care they deserve, And I think that they should, because they deserve more then just salt water.
But, I think that at the top of the page you could explane just a bit more about the hospital, and like what doctors are there, and where they go for the care.
But overall this is great!
Kind regards Eamon!
Hiya Fria. I'm Kade from YMS
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post. That picture you made was very good. How long it it take to make? Was it hard? Maybe next time after could you check your spelling and see if it makes sense.
Kind Regards
Kade
Hey Freia! my name is Ethan from YMS I like the way you have added lots of eatil about the project and by the way the penguin hospital looks amazing even though it is a good blog though you could add a bit more writing to the blog other wise it is amazing and you could check the spelling before you post it.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Fria I'm Alvin from YMS I really like the (Penguin Hospital) and I loved the drawing you did. and the sign that was quiet funny because no dog's were allowed to enter. but the funnyest was that the Penguin was on the beach!. did the Penguin swim here. who made the Penguin Hospital next time I think that you should design the hospital so we can see what it look's like or mabye if you have time you could do a animation how the Penguin got to the beach and who designed the Penguin Hospital and how was the Penguin injured? was this part of your home learning or your school blog? and also you could put a slide that shows that owners of the dogs reading the sign this is a great Blog! Fria Ka Pai! kind regards: Alvin
ReplyDeleteHello Fria! I am Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,
ReplyDeleteAnd that is a really cool poster that you have made!
I really like how you decided to make a poster, and how you decided to add the poster to your blog.
Though, there is something that I don't get about this blog post. Why did you put a sign? No offense, but it is not like dogs can read.
In order to make this blog post even better, I think that it would be great if you could add in a bit more of a description. Apart from that, Great blog post!
Did you make that penguin?
Happy Blogging!
Sam
Hello Fria,
ReplyDeleteI am Alan from Yaldhurst model school.
Great blog post. The poster was pretty cool.
How did you make the poster ? Did you use Google drawings or any other things like that ?
You can improve this blog post by writing some more.
Kind regards
Alan