In class the teacher put us into groups of three and our teacher also gave a setting, character, problem and we have to do the solution. And into our groups of three we each had to work on something I worked on the problem my other group members worked on setting and character when we had done that we have to do the solution all together and take all the writing and put it into one slide!
Hope you have fun reading our story!
Kia Ora, I am Mykiala from Yaldhurst Model school year 5.
ReplyDeleteThis is a amazing.
I liked when you told us the whole story that was cool.
You brought me back to when I was a year 3 and when I was doing a long write.
Why have you done this blog.
Keep it up!!!!
MYKIALA YMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kia ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used that really cool background but maybe you could make it so it matches the story more that would make it a lot more interesting
Did you think about going and rechecking your blog before posting because I saw some spelling mistakes so you could go and fix that but it was only a small mistake
I noticed that you used speech marks I just learned how to use speech marks and what they are for
Did you chose to write about this or was the woodpecker a class story
Kind regards Olivia🐶