Commenting Time

For the last thing on lesson 4, is to comment on one person in our class, one person from our cluster and one person in a junior class.

Here is the one where we had to comment on one of the people in our class.

Fria19 November 2018 at 17:17

Hey Kylie, I really liked how you added a picture to it to show how actually big it was. It made me think about visiting this waterfall. Maybe you could put more facts about it.

Here is the one where we had to comment on one of the people in our cluster 

Fria19 November 2018 at 17:22

Hi, Bella I like your writing that you did, it reminded me of nature, but maybe you could fix your writing because I didn't really see it, and what I mean by that is it's off the page.

Here is the one where we had to comment on one person in a junior class. 

Fria19 November 2018 at 17:26

Hi, Connor I liked your writing about hammer springs it's my favorite place to go! It reminded me of going there. Maybe you should fix your writing because it's off the page.