Commenting Time #2

For the last thing on lesson 5, we had to do comment again for someone in our class, someone from our cluster and someone from the junior class.

 This is the comment for someone in our class:

Fria19 November 2018 at 17:41

Hi Grace, I really liked how you put facts for 3 animals. This made me think about how sad it would be if all the animals were endangered. Next time you could work on putting more facts.



This is the comment for someone in our cluster:

Fria19 November 2018 at 17:47

Hey Addison! I like your highlights for this term. It reminded, me of when I do sports for school. Maybe you should work on your spelling because some of the words you spelled wrong.

This is the comment for someone in the junior class.

Fria19 November 2018 at 17:50

Hey Hunter, I like your introduction about yourself. It made me think about of how I introduced my self, when I went to school. Maybe you should use a louder voice, next time cause I couldn't really hear, you anyways your introduction was great!