We Did It!

For writing we look back to term 1 when we did descriptive writing, so our teacher

Mrs Lee put up a image

up the TV screen, it was one girl and one boy up a mountain.

So then we had to write about it descriptively..using our five senses. And it isn't a recount writing it

had to

be when we're like right there. We also had to write it with paragraphs.

What I found difficult was using the sense "Taste" because I had no idea what to write about it, it took me a long time to think about what I should write..

What I enjoyed is writing what I see because I can quickly get a beautiful picture in my head about what I see below and up top.

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Well this is my writing!

We Did It!

I could taste victory! Finally we made it! I could also taste the fresh cool water that I got out of my bag. 

I could smell the fresh warm breeze as it passes me feeling relaxed from being exhausted, then I suddenly began to close my eyes while the warm breeze passes by. 

But then I could hear my friend shouting out “We did it!!” running out of air, which made me open my eyes but then when we were both quiet, I could hear water splashing together while I hear the rocks go sliding down the mountain as I start to stand up. 

I could feel the hard rocks that felt like concrete but more round, when I began to stand up, I also feel the bright sun shining down on me beginning to feel hot. 

I can see the beautiful sky the top part was dark blue and the middle part was more of a light baby blue with white mixed in with it. I can also see the fresh cut bright green grass from all the way at the bottom of the mountain. I look around and I can see the light blue river that was running. What God made was so beautiful.