WALT: Identify the events leading up to Pentecost and recognize how the disciples felt
In room 4 we have been learning about Pentecost and the events leading up to Pentecost
Hi Fria I really like your work on Pentecost. The problem is on the first one there's not much full stops so I'm not being mean, I'm just telling you to put more full stops next time. Good work :D
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Hi Fria I really like your work on Pentecost. The problem is on the first one there's not much full stops so I'm not being mean, I'm just telling you to put more full stops next time. Good work :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Mark!, Thank you for the advice as well!.
Deleteyou can do more writing then me fria you are focused at all times .
ReplyDeleteWhat do you mean by that?
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