Llama Mission

WALT: Use paragraphs accurately in our writing, and use intresting words to enagage the readers also to use sentences of different lengths for effect.

In class for Topic we had to make a Llama, and after we had made the Llama we had to write a story about the Llama that we made, but we had two choices to either write about your Llama going on an adventure or your how your Llama was made. I wrote about my Llama going on a adventure. The teacher also wrote 3 words on the whiteboard which we had to include in our writing, the first thing that she wrote was "Llama" then "Paragraphs" and "Engaging." which meant we had to put intresting words to enagage the reader or want to make the reader want to read your story.

If you had to write a story would your write about your Llama having an adventure or how your Llama was made?
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 This is my writing! It isn't finished yet..

 “We are going on an adventure,” I said happily as I was skipping through the forest with my group on our way, but..we had a mission it was to find these five gems around the forest, and if we get it before the night comes and before, any other groups get it we get a secret surprise..but how will they know we got it? We all have to yell “5 gems!!” and then our teachers will come and check if we have ten, of the gems but if one of the teams yells it at the same time, then one of the groups have to persuade the teachers to check their gems first.


 I went with four other llamas, all of them were friends and we all looked the same which was kinda weird…Anyways let’s start searching.


 “Look guys there’s another llama” “I don’t think that’s a real llama” “I mean it is on the tree??” “hello?!” “no response” “of course, cause it’s not real!” “wait guys look!” “what?” “a door!” “there can’t be any doors on a tree don’t be crazy” “I AM NOT, there’s a door behind this fake llama poster thingy” “you mean ON a tree?” “uh, I guess so” “REALLY BEHIND A TREE!?” “Stop yelling!” “We will just have to check” “fine, then.” “Wow there really is?” “see! I told you” "fine, let’s just go in.”

 “Wow…” “It looks so cool!” “There’s so much gems!” “We can take five then we’ll win!” “Isn’t that kind of cheating..?” “Well..we did find it so it’s not cheating” “Yeah, she’s right” “Let’s take it then” “already got five!” “let’s go!” “but where’s the door?..” “Are you kidding me?” “I was joking, let’s get out of here” ..eeEeeEkkk “hurry! I hear a team coming'' “okay jeez” “AH!” “are you okay!?” “I'm fine” “everyone back in!” “what?!” “they were coming, but we didn't have much time” “let’s go llamas!” “okay..”

The 6 Matariki Stars

WALT: Retell the story of matariki and identify the signifance of this time. In room five we were learning about matariki and for our task we had to create a dlo - digital learning object. And we had to write about what the six sisters enjoyed doing, their name, what can we learn from them, a symbol that can represent them and we can also write a intresting fact that we have learnt. 

 I enjoyed doing the symbols for the matariki sisters because I think it represent them really well and I didn't really find anything diffcult because the facts about them were all on our class site, and it was also easy to write about them aswell-  What is your favourite symbol and why?

And here is my slideshow!

Why Is Personal Hygiene Important?

WALT: Write and structure explantion writing -
In our class we had to write a paragraph of why personal hygiene is very important but we had to do it in a structure and identify the "seer" in our paragraph and if your wondering what "seer" stands for it stands for: Starting Sentence - what you are going to talk about. Explantion - Explaining your topic. Examples - Examples about your explanations. Relevance - Reflecting back onto the topic. And for the structure we had to write about Personal Hygiene we also went through the slideshow about why personal hygiene is very important then we had to write about why it is important in the seer structure.

For the writing, I found the structure a bit diffcult to do because it was a little bit confusing but now I can do it! I enjoyed writing about it because it was actually pretty fun and I wanted to do more.
-- Here is MY writing!


Personal Hygiene is very important because it keeps your body clean and makes you more healthy. For example brushing our teeth makes our teeth clean that is very important because it removes all the plaque from our teeth which can cause a toothache or cavities and more. Another example is washing your hands makes you very healthy and around others as well because if you have touched something dirty which include things around your house and you touch someone’s hand it could spread germs to other people around you and it could make them feel sick. Also having a shower almost every day this is very important because you can be very smelly and dirty and it is also important to shower every time you exercise or go on a jog. Furthermore it is very very important to keep your body clean and healthy.